Dumsoda Posted October 19, 2005 Report Share Posted October 19, 2005 Whoever wrote this is a total bastard !!!!..555 Got me in from the opening sentence.... As soon as I read about the black skirt and white blouse I was a total lost cause........they get my total attention every time...without fail. Remember walking into a street sign in Bkk one day, because I was "pleasantly distracted"..... my wife just laughed....Som nom na, she said, serves you right you dirty old man. Guess she was half right........I'm not THAT old.. Nice stuff....I like your work.. Cheers Dumsoda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
addo Posted October 19, 2005 Report Share Posted October 19, 2005 Mate a grate spin in the end a real cracker. If itsa chin chin I am envouse of you half your luck. Thanks for the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 20, 2005 Report Share Posted October 20, 2005 I really liked this. Short, sweet and a happy ending when I expected poignancy. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shit-Spattered Dog Posted November 5, 2005 Report Share Posted November 5, 2005 Tear-Jerker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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