Guest Posted March 3, 2003 Report Share Posted March 3, 2003 bromad1972, It was a good story, and I'm sure things like this happen all the time in the LOS. With language problem we have with the girl, we say one thing and they think another. Again, I enjoyed the read, but I would like to think that something posted on the 'Trip Report' is a true story. Maybe doctored up a little to hold the readers interest. That is why I haven't writen any of my trips. I'm not a writter. I'm sure you don't want to hear; landed at airport, went thru Imigration, got luggage, and got to hotel, ect ect ect. Maybe this 'story' should have been posted on the 'Members Board', with a pre statement "fiction story" here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spirit_of_town_hall Posted March 3, 2003 Report Share Posted March 3, 2003 Still post your report, its not so much the style but the content. In fact I would welcome a factual report, some reports are almost too descriptive . STH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Central Scrutinizer Posted March 5, 2003 Report Share Posted March 5, 2003 Bromad, Well done. I enjoyed the story very much. Fiction or non-fiction. Had a feeling of the truth about it, it did. I could see it happening, probably many times over in Bangkok. Where did you come up with the idea for this story? Cent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Central Scrutinizer Posted March 5, 2003 Report Share Posted March 5, 2003 Leotex, Actually it is the "Trip Report/Stories" section, so it is appropriate here as a story. There is no rule that a story has to be a true one. Although I myself would claim it as fiction somewhere in the title, or at least in the end, if it was fiction I wrote. All in all a good read though I thought. I have no problem with it here. True or not. Cent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bromad1972 Posted March 5, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2003 Hey Cent! Thanks a lot for the compliment! Means a lot coming from the 'master' :-) The idea was just to use the line " Things Change ", really made it up as I went. Just typed it as it came to me....no back work...too short for that...burst of inspiration Working on a much longer piece...will post in pieces 3 chapters long...if it is ok with everyone? Once again Cent, thanks for the kind words....it is greatly appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 6, 2003 Report Share Posted March 6, 2003 Working on a much longer piece...will post in pieces 3 chapters long...if it is ok with everyone? Sounds great to me. Get a posting. :applause: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khwaimaisabai Posted March 7, 2003 Report Share Posted March 7, 2003 Hi bromad, Yes - nice story, liked it. Puts me in the mood for walking down Suk after work and stopping off in Soi 4 for a beer. Friday nights, nothing like it - out in four hours or so. Khwai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redbaron Posted March 7, 2003 Report Share Posted March 7, 2003 please do. Looking forward to it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Central Scrutinizer Posted March 7, 2003 Report Share Posted March 7, 2003 Bromad, Please do put up your other story/stories here for us all to enjoy. I know I want to see/read what you've done. This is the right section for it too. Just label it fiction in the title somewhere, or in the intro when you first post it. Just to avoid any problems or confusion with someone thinking it is a real tale. You have talent Bromad. Keep up the good work. If you have any questions about posting one of your stories just PM me. Later, Cent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fisherman Posted March 14, 2003 Report Share Posted March 14, 2003 Great story. Whether it's fiction or not, it makes for very enjoyable reading. Do keep posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.