CTO Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 I like it, has pathos, truth, a victim! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damen Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 There once was a guy named Fiery Jack Who pissed out a shit from his crust laden crack He then wiped the splash from his balls and his cock With a old dirty rag and a stinky black sock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Munchmaster Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Nah, clever though it may be Dumsodas is not a Limerick. A Limerick has 5 lines. You to Damen, not a Limerick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damen Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Sorry, I just looked at the correct form of a limerick. Let's go with this then.... There once was a guy named Fiery Jack Who pissed out a shit from his crust laden crack Perplexed by the lack of a turd in the bowl He shared his tale on this board days ago He now walks the streets with a turd on his back :content: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Munchmaster Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Munch better. But a Limerick about Fiery Jacks turds is just a little bit creepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeakHunt Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Nah, clever though it may be Dumsodas is not a Limerick. A Limerick has 5 lines. You to Damen, not a Limerick. It's the right rhyming scheme but laid out over 4 lines. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mekong Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 And here was me thinking Limerick was a city in Eire that back in 1919 went indipendent for 13 days and referred to itself as Limerick Soviet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damen Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Munch better. But a Limerick about Fiery Jacks turds is just a little bit creepy. Just a "little" bit creepy? What can I say.. I was inspired by his posts on the Thai360 Shout Box. Although not orginal, this was always favorite of mine: There once was an old whore named Sue Who filled up her pussy with glue She said with a grin If they pay to get in They'll pay to get out of it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dumsoda Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Didn't know about the 5 lines bit...Dum Cnut lol How about this then..... An old cnut from Oz called Dumsoda Met a girl, in a Bar, whilst not sober She was "perfect" 'twas said and turned many a head A shame half the world paid...and then rode her Cheers DS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CTO Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Brilliant, still a winner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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