Old Hippie Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Either way, the story needs more detail of how and why/where this farang doctor on holiday got the gun...I seriously doubt he packed in his bag and brought it with him...the story needs more detail...good up to a point, then seems to be falling apart...maybe we need to get PS some booze so he can finish it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flashermac Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 I hope PS comes up with the rest. We can't just leave things dangling like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Don't worry guys, I'd thought this *true* story needed some madness (that was always ever present and growing) so I'd skulled a bottle of scotch, thinking I could revive the very spirit of Hemingway, I think I'd heard he did that once and it was worthy of emulation. Fortunately I had my Doctor's home visit case on hand, because I quickly realised I'd most likely killed myself. I immediately induced vomiting with a drug, then set myself on a drip and oxygen. I recovered quite quickly, but I've been rather ill since then. I'm fine now! When I shot the General, my aim was all wrong, I'd just blew a very small hole in the pillow beside his head... Part 5 coming soon.... Torn said she knows all I want is something to play with; I love it when she tells me to stop... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flashermac Posted December 21, 2010 Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Great! Welcome back ... and stick to Leo next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nervous God Posted December 21, 2010 Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Tom said she knows all I want ois something to play with? OK - Question, Is Tom a Katoey? Are you diddling the general, sorry, but we do need some Old Hippie time here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Hippie Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 There you go with your homo fantasies aain, ruining what could be a good story, the kid thinks he is another Hemingway for shit sake...ok...back up... Now, where did you get the gun? "found it in the general's limo? took it off a hit man using your Ju-jitsu skills? Torn got it for you? now...ok, you missed the general...is he pissed? forgiving...? think about this...you missed, deliberate? or just a bad shot? Unlucky shot? The genral lives...but how? and what does he plan for you? Think this through, don't rush Part 5...we can wait if it is good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LizardKing Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 Oy, Emmit ain't not Hemingway. He's gotta think. Let the lad alone fer a day or two ya cranky bastard! Sorry, just came frome the Scot thread! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Hippie Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 Ok, well trying to help the old handsome man along...I mean as adults, we need to nurture kids, and help them realize their dreams and goals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 I realise that it's a bit early for film rights, and remember this is a *true* story but I was thinking Jackie Chan would be a good fit for the General. Now I know this will be a bit controversial, but I think the part of Torn should be played by a Laotian girl since they are more beautiful then Thai girls (please no conjecture about this! My mind is made up). Actress Chermarn Boonyasak would be perfect. To play me I really think that it would be a touch of genius to cast Rain http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rain_(entertainer). The popular Kpop superstar. He will have to die his hair blonde and wear blue lenses, but otherwise I think he has the goods to pull it off. Perhaps he will need to work at a hospital for six months to really get into the role. Anyhow Part 5 of this true story will be coming soon - tonight if I possible!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flashermac Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 All right! Let the story roll on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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