Old Hippie Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 I have to agree! This is more fun than we have had in ages. Thanks PS...now pull it together, and finish the story in some semblance of order...you have it in you...you got this far... O,k, So the General is after you, you have a gun...you have it to his head...but how did you get to that point, how and what transpired between then and now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 I'm going to see out all lows and highs, jesus you guys just don't really get it. I'm going to walk down the pub, and I trust in the meantime you are going to get over it. Are we still in action? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Okay very well, lets go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acockasian Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 ...and include a lot of sex stuff with the daughter. Not that it matters to me but I think that some other readers here might really need it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Man this is good whisky, single malt 12 year old stuff tastes very smokey the General's very own. I shot the General at dawn. His security detail was remiss in only one detail, and I ruthlessly exploited it. The General paid with his life. Torn appeared naked and spoke in Thai, what had I done? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flashermac Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Incest? She'd been sleeping with her old man? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TroyinEwa/Perv Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Maybe they're Swiss/Thai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Hippie Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 This story is falling apart fast here, needs tightening up a bit...ok, he wasted the general, security detail fucked up...details man details, again, think Tom Clancy! We want to know how the security detail fucked up, and how you cleverly exploited that fuck up. We also want to know any dialogue between you and the general, any last minute deals or shit like that...now down more hootch, and rewrite the last few installments...Torn can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flashermac Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Tom Clancy :reindeer: :reindeer: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pom Michael Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Almost! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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