panadolsandwich Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 It is 'you are' right you formless prick. I might not tell a great story but at least I know my grammar. LOL part three soon...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I'm going to try to keep writing this piece which is the full and honest truth, but I require some measure of support. I didn't think there would be so many detractors.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 She's got her hands in my hair and her lips everywhere. Her chest was on mine and the sweat was dripping she came extravagantly. I feared the General might of been alerted. I had the Browning pistol ready. It was a weighty pistol, but having trained as an officer in the Australian Army I was ready to use it. She murmured her appreciation, and fell asleep. I took the pistol and turning the safety off, I went to patrol the house.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shygye Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 ... obviously this is the prequel to the Eugenics Wars! KHANNN! FDQWCxjf1sM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nervous God Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 <> That should read "HAVE BEEN ALERTED" But what would I know 555 Why did she appreciate you having a pistol? Keep writing, I'll correct the gramma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shygye Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I'm going to try to keep writing this piece which is the full and honest truth, but I require some measure of support. I didn't think there would be so many detractors.... Did you die? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nervous God Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Shit don't spoil the ending, I'm enjoy this! Did you see the movie ShyGuy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
expat Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I never told anyone but I'm a gazillionaire and I'm really, really hansum...part two real soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
expat Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I'm beginning to suspect something is not quite right here--sorry if I'm going out on a limb. No limb' date=' just the kid back to entertain us with his exploits of how great he is...except it seems, as NG pointed out, he can't quite figure out who or what he is...[/quote'] Where's the smiley for watching the irony sail over Old Hippie's head? Hey, don't you have any plans to get down here to Patters any time soon, OH? I figger I owes you a beer or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panadolsandwich Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Hello there guys I"m so sorry but I've ran out of beer and this really sucks but I can't continue. At least until I get some more beer. Don't worry this really sucks for me as well. I'll get back to you as soon as possible. That Browning pistol has been fired in anger! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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